Presentation feedback

To consider for the development of our concepts:

- the distance between the station and the first "stop" should be small

- we don't need to show tourists the way, so we don't need to incorporate the map of Delft

- we can try to use cartoons or symbols instead of photos for the "stops", which may be clearer for people unfamiliar with Delft

- we have to decide which shops, museums, etc we are going to use in our design

Does anyone from the groups who have to comment on ours (or someone completely random of course!) any other suggestions?

Idea development

First ideas circle map

Two layers of different saturations, and a slightly different orientation for the circle:

And variations in distance between the "stops".

"Pop-up" effect using size and colour. When the first step is clear, the audience's cognitive thread will follow the circle in the right direction.